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HOLD
Teaser
FADE IN:
Water sparkles in the sun, waves are soft, it's a bright day in
New York
with normal
EAST RIVER
boat traffic that includes a freighter chugging upriver giving off a lot of smoke.
INT. 55 CHARLIE (MOVING) -- DAY (2:20 PM)
Cruising north on FDR Drive, SULLY juggles a steaming coffee, He's alone in the RMP, checks the time, shows mild disgust.
SULLY
What is it with me? Half-hour early for everything, even work.
Glancing at river traffic, he frowns like, What Do You Expect?
SULLY
You got no life, that's why. One more sulky, Sully-day.
Then, he notices a MERCEDES BUSINESSMAN his own age, blowing kisses into a cell phone.
SULLY
But, Tatiana... oh, that Tatiana.
Now, his hopeful face stands out from the hurried, preoccupied faces of other drivers.
INT. FIREHOUSE LOUNGE - DAY (2:21 PM)
JIMMY DOHERTY, CARLOS NIETO, DOC PARKER, LOMBARDO, with the CAPTAIN and other FIREFIGHTERS and
EMS
, play cards.
DOHERTY
(to Carlos)
This is for the whole thing now, you know that. You sure you want it?
CARLOS
Go. Just givit to me, man. I gotta win with this one.
But Doherty reluctantly reveals his winning hand, and Carlos, fully expecting to win, tosses his cards in the central pile.
DOHERTY
(hip-hopping)
Gotta learn to play/ For you to stay a-way/ From the dirty chores, Carlito!
Firefighters and paramedics get a big laugh, high fives.
Carlos gets up, looking all down and disgusted. Doc grins, seems to secretly love Carlos losing.
LOMBARDO
And, Carlos, don't miss any part of those lo-ong undercarriage sections!
CARLOS
(turning around serious)
It's not that funny. I had an exam.
(head bowed, he looks about to cry)
It's like you guys want me to fail.
DOC/OTHERS
Hey, man... Come back... It's not like that, man... c'm on... Someone wins, someone loses, nothin personal.
Carlos walks into the...
DORMITORY
ALEX TAYLOR is in a flesh-tone leotard, doing a cool Yoga position by standing on one leg with arms spread, and her other leg fully extended back.
Carlos proceeds with caution. Lies face-down on the bunk, flaps open his neurochem book.
ALEX
Giving you a good razzin' out there?
CARLOS
Ag-h. Yeah, what's new?
ALEX
Look, I always get stuck with the lousy jobs, too. I'll help you with the undercarriage.
CARLOS
(a twinkle in his eye)
Really? God... Good... fine. Don't suppose you know any neurochem?
The Captain STRIDES in, and Alex comes out of her Yoga position. He hands them envelopes.
CAPTAIN
Big wigs uptown. Updating all the certifications and CEU requirements.
CARLOS
Great. More requirements.
CAPTAIN
Cheer up, Nieto, you can get out of it by giving talks at local schools.
CARLOS
Me? Talks. About what?
CAPTAIN
It's a new idea. Basically just a recruiting scheme. Think about it.
The Captain taps once on the door jamb, and departs.
INT. YOKAS' APARTMENT -- DAY (2:25 PM)
Mellow sun's RAYS stream in the gauze-draped windows, falling on FRED's clean-shaven face as he stands at the kitchen sink with a dishrag, screwing dry the inside of a plastic cup.
FAITH YOKAS sits in uniform, finishes the last luscious bites of a sandwich.
YOKAS
Umm. Thanks for making this, Fred.
FRED
I put salsa in the tuna.
SCRREEEECH! The kitchen chair backs away from the table as she snaps to her feet, empty plate and glass in hand.
YOKAS
I knew it was different.
He faces her, arms folded loosely, leans over so Yokas can reach the sink.
FRED
What time you think you'll be home?
Yokas flinches, puts the dish in the sink.
YOKAS
You keeping up with me?
FRED
No. Aren't you getting home early so the kids can give you presents?
YOKAS
They can wish me a happy birthday tomorrow. The cake'll be good.
FRED
It's not the same.
KNOCKING ON THE DOOR
YOKAS
Yeah, but it has to do.
Yokas answers it. It's an ASIAN TEENAGE GIRL, blue-hair.
TEENAGE GIRL
Excuse me. I'm a neighbor, in 2C. Can you come down to our apartment?
YOKAS
Sure. What's the problem?
TEENAGE GIRL
I think someone stole our jewelry.
YOKAS
OK. I'll be down.
She closes the door, returns to lean against the counter.
FRED
I thought you were using some of the time you had saved up?
YOKAS
I told you, Fred, it's my regular shift. God forbid I need that time for something important.
FRED
It's important that the kids give you your presents on your birthday.
YOKAS
Get off it, Fred.
He whips the dishrag over the faucet stem.
FRED
They should give you birthdays off.
YOKAS
It's a regular shift. I have to go.
She leaves quickly. Fred smooths out the folds on the dishrag draped over the faucet.
INT. APARTMENT HALLWAY -- MOMENTS LATER
Yokas walks up to
APT
2C. Doesn't hear anything. She's about to knock when a MUFFLED VOICE SPEAKS in a foreign language, not Spanish. INS is mentioned.
She KNOCKS. It goes quiet again, then the teenager answers.
INT.
APARTMENT
2C -- CONTINUOUS
An ASIAN MAN and WOMAN fidget on the couch. Everyone's a bit edgy.
YOKAS
I'm Faith Yokas, a neighbor upstairs. Did you lose some jewelry?
ASIAN MAN
We're not sure. We don't want to make any report.
YOKAS
Did you lose some valuables, or not?
No response, then,
TEENAGE GIRL
My friend said she was raped last night. She's not legal... you know?
Yokas looks confused, suspicious, takes out her report pad.
YOKAS
She scared to come forward? She can't be sent back, if that's it.
ASIAN MAN
What about INS? You make a report.
YOKAS
It's a law, police can't call INS if there's a crime. On the other hand, I'm not on duty yet. What's your friend's name?
The three of them look at each other. The girl bows her head, begins breaking into tears.
TEENAGE GIRL
It's me.
The adults don't move, studying Yokas.
YOKAS
You have a problem. I can help.
Yokas places her hand gently on the teenager's arm.
But the Asian man SPRINGS off the couch, SHOVES Yokas away from the sobbing girl.
ASIAN MAN
No! You only bring more problems!
Yokas handles her club, doesn't want to use it.
YOKAS
Back off, sir. I know, it's tough, but assaulting the police makes it worse. This is up to her.
The Asian man sweats, a slow boil of frustration and mistrust.
ASIAN MAN
(contemptuous to Yokas)
You don't care, you people, how we suffer to get to the
U.S.
How it is to live here. Everyone an enemy.
He storms by Yokas, through the doorway, out of the apartment.
TEENAGE GIRL
Help me. Please. We just wanted some help.
Yokas strokes back the girl's matted blue hair, looks at the dubious woman on the couch.
YOKAS
Sure, I will...
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